Being with you was a mistake
floating in feelings
that are so fake
Wishing the memories would go away
the color of love
slowly turns to grey
Swimming in a sea of your lies
I'm slowly drowing
in the tears i cry
You said our romance was fantastic
baby it was so fake
just like plastic
Hidden beneath a shadow of doubt
I can now see
What you are about
I used to count the heart beats you'd make
now all I do is
count the one's you break
Now it's time to stand up and make a stance
that all we had
was a plastic romance
A contest entry
- xx - Love - sucks - xx by The Hardest Goodbye.
300 points, ended June 17, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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awsome
damn you are pretty good at writing your feelings keep it up -
i love it, it explained a terrible relaiship to a tee.
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I absolutely love this poem, I love how you slowly explain the meaning of the title throughout the poem and how it all comes together perfectly in the end, it shows alot of emotion which is very good for a writter to have
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as u know when u sign on. i have finished my contest and am happy to inform you that you won!!!! YAY i loved your poem so much
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wow. I really liked this poem and the emotions that you expressed in it
I'm glad that you entered my contest =) Good luck!
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