I've done everything that I've ever dreamed of doing
I've climbed every mountain, forged every brook
I've never been attached to anything - I'm not that type of girl
Yet you stole my heart with just one look
Now suddenly my world is filled with rainbows
And lucky stars are gleaming up above
I go for thrills, but I've never felt this way before
Is this what it feels like to be in love?
My flaws and my mistakes that I've encountered
You make me feel like none of them exist
Attachment and addiction takes their weight off of my back
I could go on forever just like this
I've been everywhere that I've ever dreamed of going
Yet I've never seen the sky so deep a blue
And now I think I'm done with traveling for thrills
I just want to spend all my time loving you
Author notes
Based on Keith Urban's "Love Somebody Like You". I personally don't think it's very good; I just wrote it all within five minutes.
A contest entry
- Write a poem based on these lyrics.... by Clinging-to-Life.
800 points, ended June 22, 2007, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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300 points, ended August 4, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love by Madison Mary.
650 points, ended September 10, 2007, 59 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Was this a Quickie Contest it doesn't look like it ????
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5 mins!!! Wow On your page you said you are not good at writing!!! That is a lie!! I think you are very talented!! Keep up the good work and feel free to check out my page anytime!!!
Jess
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this is a very good poem considering the time table that you wrote it in. I think that it's very cute and I liked reading it a lot.
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Hmm...Well Im not going to say that this peice isnt good. But, I shall be honest in saying, it is not the greatest. I like it in the sense that it is very cute, and i can understand the feelings...I guess if I had to choose my fav. lines, It would have to be, basically, the last stanza. It's very touching. Thank you for entering and goodluck in the contest.
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