Send forth the angel of death
To tame a prevailing lust
The pending war is conquered,
Forbid the soldier’s assuming triumph
Now is the moment for coalition
Farmers with pitchforks
Pain, torture, distress
Revenge on a murderer
Back and forth the minds invade
There is no retrieving what is lost
Vanishing love that once was
The time has come to befriend the noose
Clear me from this body of defeat
Take away my regret
And vivid dreams
My psychotic thoughts
Author notes
cellogrl315
A contest entry
- for those who want to improve their poems and meet friends at the same time by star wars fanatic.
700 points, ended July 2, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very eerie, I imagined it being about the Revolution. Very nicely done with some great word choice and imagery. Thanks for entering.
*finalist* -
Deep!
Now is moment for the coalition
Farmers with pitchforks
Pain, torture, distress
Revenge on a murderer
Back and forth the minds invade
There is no retrieving what is lost
Vanishing love that once was
The time has come to befriend the noose
You have an amazing way with words!
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