The wind of spring is blowing
Sending soft shivers down my body
Answering all that I'm wondering
If that we both are meant to be
Your eyes ask me things
That I have no answers for
The dreams your touch brings
Are reaching down to my soul
I fear that one day we
Will part in an autumn night
Where the stars are no where to see
In a place that's drained of light
The chill this winter hold
Is going down my bones
The place is shacking with cold
The trees are ghostly and alone
I picture us holding
Into each other's hands
Rubbing them and folding
Them with gloves over the flames
Your smile is shining over lands
Your eyes glittering with love
Your touch is blessing my hands
Your wings are like those of doves
But what if all sessions end
And our time will run out
Will we get lost with the wind?
Should we let this love end to drought?
I'll fight for you like I promised
And in return keep yourself safe for me
We both have been honest
And helped this love find its way
So let's love each other forever now
Author notes
For me and my lovely girlfriend =)
Please tell me what you think
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*reads, glumps, blush, smiles*
Very good...
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lol, don't blush you look so cute when blushing.
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This is great
"The wind of spring is blowing
Sending soft shivers down my body
Answering all that I'm wondering
If that we both are meant to be"
This is a great opening verse, it has rythmn, it has good imagery and i felt the emotion behind the words, great format. its great.
thanks for postin
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And thanks for reading, mate. I'm glad you liked it.
~AS
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Oh. This is a nice little poem that you have here. It is filled with lots of beautiful thoughts about you and your girlfriend. I'm sure when she read this she was blushed with happiness. Not only is it nice thoughts but your ideas of a future together and that is one of the most romantic things you can talk about with a girl. I think that you did a good job of expressing yourself.
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