Should I love
you the way I do?
Should I have forgiven you?
Is your hear t true?
Should I stay
With you 'til the end?
Or should we take time apart,
So my heart can mend?
Should I tell you how I really feel?
I don't think you'd be able to deal.
so many questions
are running through my head.
You know how I feel
Only when your drunk.
Too bad you don't remember
What you said.
So this still leaves doubt
In my mind.
Should I keep loving you
And just stay blind?
A contest entry
- xx - Love - sucks - xx by The Hardest Goodbye.
300 points, ended June 17, 2007, 8 entries
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love it!
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great write. thanks for entering it in my contest!
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yea. this is sad. but it is a kick-ass poem
and i loved it so much. so very expressive and wonderful!
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awww that is sad. i think it is very good. great write. very emotional and deep. i think it is sad that they dont remember what is said because they say it when they are drunk. that is very sad indeed. well congrats on such a good piece.
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I wery like this
''Should I keep loving you
And just stay blind?'' this i like the most, but all poem is wery good
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