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Trust

It's always there,
as much as it hurts, your friends can come and go,
your family doesn't always stick with you,
you might leave your teachers, when it's time to grow,
but your conscience will always be there.
So you have to learn to trust it,
no matter what you do,
you need to listen to your gut,
cause no one knows where your gaurdian angel might be.
We don't all have some one to take care of us,
We just have to learn to trust ourselves,
for now,
and forever.
But even though they might not always be there,
we know we have to trust the ones we love,
We can't just live in some deep dark hole,
all alone.
As humans, we need help,
and we need to help,
cause our lives, our relationships, they're all we've got.

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I'm twelve years old,
and I picked image 4.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    June 26, 2007

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    Some great advice on life. I think you have a knack for getting your point across accurately and with a flair that is easy for all to grasp. Excellent work on this piece.


  • Sonate
    June 24, 2007

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    Interesting

    It's interesting because I used the same picture but it was for a completely different purpose. But it's still very good! Good luck in the contest!!




  • leander Moderators member
    June 23, 2007

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    What a beautiful message you have managed to display here thought-provoking and wonderful well done!


  • RIP Whoever
    June 18, 2007

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    wow

    so down to earth.
    when the truth surfaces, someone gets hurt. but that's what happens. as much as it's sad... it's like that to stay. people have feelings, and their reaction always changes how much truth is hidden or exposed.

    wowo... you being the same age as me i'm speechless. this is really good


  • VampireAngel
    June 17, 2007

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    This poem is great
    I it I cen see the reality of life
    Its greta for human in age 12 An it is great form everyone... But thas my opinion

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