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Darling Aries

Darling Aries, tell me
Our love grows day by day

You brought the smile
Opened up the heart I’d locked
Until the day my saviour came
With the light to redeem my soul

As I walked the path of life
No flowers bloomed at my feet
No sun shone in my clouded sky
All I ever felt was loneliness
Gone now are those days of sadness
Emptiness is but a bitter memory
Tomorrow is no longer my greatest fear

My darling, I must thank you for
All the joy you have given me
Reach out to me, Aries, for I’m
Reaching out to you
I long for your tender touch
Embrace me and whisper from you heart
Darling Aries, I love you

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Just something I came out with. Let me know if there's anything thats sounds silly etc..! Thanks for reading! Take care, Sam (Dreams27) xx

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  • BeThouMyVision
    August 20, 2007

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    I really enjoyed reading this.
    It was very nice, and the end just made it so much better, I like the descriptions for longing for a touch.
    It pulled you in as you read it, well atleast me.
    Im suprised you don't have anymore comments on it.
    You're good.

    Ill surely read more when I get some more time.
    Missy.
    good day.