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"Dead"

I am jostled about like a
Doorknob, gold and with a shine
Like a filling,
And a fly between my lips.

My hands curl into me,
Miniature weeping willows,
Over my earth-bed.

My eyelids are shut tight
Like two clams,
My glazed-over eyesockets
The pearls they must protect.

I am jostled about
By a sea of traffic,
But I am not really there.

No more pantheons of rifles,
No more birthday presents wrapped
In cutting piano wire.
There will be no more potatoes and stew.

O thank God!
Thank God that I am
Dead!

Author notes

Wrote this while half asleep as the 1st stanza came into my head while I was sleeping, as what happens often *shrugs*.

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  • Eyes Full of Rain
    June 21, 2007

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    Good Golly

    This poem is absolutely my favourite poem by you and possibly by anyone on All Poetry. It is such a great idea and the execution belittles your age. You relly are a talented lady. My favourite line is 'My hands curl into me,
    Miniature weeping willows,
    Over my earth-bed' Quite simply brilliant. free verse poetry of the highest order. Keep up the fantstic work.