The sky is dark
My face a frown
Eyes cast downward
Back is hunched
Heart is beating
slower...slower...
Tears are falling
No one likes me
No one loves me
No one cares for me
No one looks for me
I am alone
I am heartbroken
I am distraught
I am annoyed
I am broken
There is no Love for me....
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Aww I would feel so down about love if I where you...sure its a nice feeling to have...but there are so many other great feeling too. Like friendship for example...and besides I'm a strong believer there is someone out there for everyone...how could it not be true?...there is what6 billion people in this world...there has to be someone...a shame its like a needle in a haystack at times...anyways...the poem was great...you described the emotion of being "alone" very well...well anough so that this reader anyways knew what kind of heartache your in...which if the poem can do that...then it was obviously well penned...anyway...don't give up on your search...there will always be rough times in life...we all just have to fight through them when they do come...I wish you good luck on your search...and great write
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