A decision is made:
and the way is clear
though the wood cloaked in shadows
reveals a known path.
Yet the fear of darkness striking
wraps me round, hovering.
Please tell me what you think
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i also feel like this sometimes...i like this too...
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there is something about this piece i really like- i like that you didnt take an obvious path with your image inspired poem-
although the piece is small i do believe there are a couple spots it could still be tightened to make it an even stronger read. -
happy to find you and it in this contest
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I saw the picture and your verses captured it perfect. As always I like your expression very much. Short, but enough strong to lead us within the beauty of your petry.
~Sonja~
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