Double dipping
Triple tipping
Kind of flipping
But so hipping
Are you slipping
I'll be zipping
you kind of whacky
That's so tacky
where's your sacky
got your backy
times are slacky
on your tracky
don't give me flacky
This is funny
feels so sunny
nose is runny
my name is slunny
I'm from dunny
going to hummy
to see bunny
no, I'm not lunny
This is the end
where have you been
counted past ten
thats a sin
are we kin
money to lend
see you over the ben
you're a real friend
well, until then
The final end
In a list
A contest entry
- Repel - Experimental Poetry by cvillelisa.
450 points, ended June 24, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~ The Best of the Worst~ by Florida Sunshine.
700 points, ended July 4, 2007, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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actually reminds me of a poem a schizophrenic would write- this is really bad - not only did you get the bad down, but also what was I thinking. However there is a porblem. NONSENSE poetry is actually a type of poetry, and this fits quite nicely with a bit of tweaking.
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OKAY~ I do ask myself "What were you thinking???" lol Its an enteertaining write~ but I still don't get it except you rhyming the last word in your stanzas... and each stanza is a different line amount... I would had thought it cooler if there was a formula to it.. but you go 6,7,8 then jump to 10 .... It has a cute way about it.... but.... Whacky is appropriately titled. Thanks for entering my contest~ you got my vote.. Lets see what the other judges think~ Nice entry...
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Rushy rushy is this poem.
Thank you for entering the experimental poetry contest.
Lisa -
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Hope it was something closely resembling what you were looking for. lol and thanks for the idea of it, it was fun
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whacky baccy went a slappy on my brand new wooden leg, then i dropped a match and did not catch now i am not so happy but hopping mad.
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Ian
You slay me, you surely do..hahaha lol
TY
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