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To Sleep ... To Dream

                    To Sleep …. To Dream


                    to you
                    my deep, beautiful melancholy
                    who trace my hopes' perceptible shake
                    to duels with somnolent truth.

                    My body lies
                    and, like the bittern, cries
                    shown chaste by the reticent sun.










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  • leo2
    June 23, 2007

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    You're supposed to dance like nobody's looking. I'm glad I peeked. Something somber with just a touch of melancholy. And methinks you dance well.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • heartnsoul
    June 23, 2007

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    Leave them to duel as I fall deep into nearness of you. For if this is where you are, this is where I want to be.
    As the sun pulls down my melancholy blanket,my cries reach the pitch of Ella Fitzgerald's shattering the skies
    Looking up to the ceiling then out my window I wonder...
    was it real or was it Memorex...no matter, that you were here with me if only for a moment, I shall carry you with me throughout my day. In hopes, of having you once again under my melancholy blanket.

    Once again, my take most likely so far off base. But that you make me think, makes me love the way you think even more. One does not need to be prolific to shake the world. I love you Pookiebear
    ~Michelle~


  • cubert
    June 18, 2007
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    I dreamt of you last night....g


  • misselaineous
    June 17, 2007
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  • cubert
    June 17, 2007

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    I have not dreamt since moving away. I did not feel til just now. I will find a way back to you!!!

    And while I am here now, come curl into my hair....


  • cvillelisa
    June 17, 2007
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    you wrote
    you wrote
    you wrote





    oh you wrote. sigh.


    Lisa

    • oneluckygirl
      June 17, 2007
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      selfishly so...



      but yes, I wrote. One must stumble before one can dance.

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