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refraction

reflection shown in fractured glass
an askew view of my soul
or perhaps my psyche has cracked
and i'm the last to know
puzzled by the myriad views
is this truly me
am i gazing at something false
made to make me bleed
tears cannot fill the fissures
but glue may set me free

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  • Bryan K Johnson
    June 17, 2007
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    Really cool write, and I love the light rhyme. Imagery is great too. Thank you for entering. I'm still trying to figure out if you read the rules though. if you weren't braking one, you would be in the finalist.