I’m sorry that I’m still alive
I’m sorry that I care
I’m sorry that I gave us up
I’m sorry I was there
I’m sorry for how I acted
I’m sorry for what I did
I’m sorry for the way I am
I’m sorry I’m still a kid
I’m sorry I couldn’t give it up
I’m sorry I couldn’t confess
I’m sorry I couldn’t make you smile
I’m sorry for this mess
I’m sorry how I loved you
I’m sorry how you knew
I’m sorry how you kept on going
I’m sorry that we’re through
I’m sorry we thought we knew the answers
I’m sorry we were in love
I’m sorry we promised each other things
I’m sorry you almost sent me above
I’m sorry because I still need you
I’m sorry because you still make me smile
I’m sorry because you still make me cry
I’m sorry you’re making it all worthwhile
I’m sorry that I still need you
I’m sorry that I still depend on you
I’m sorry that I still believe you
I’m sorry I can’t believe we’re through
And even though I asked us to be done
I always thought you would ask me to stay
But it looks like I was mistaken again…
I can’t believe I made it through another day
So if I ever break my promise
And they find me on the floor, dead
You will know who’s to blame
Since your dreams will be painted red.
Author notes
Not too sure if this is a different style or not...
I pray it is.
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A contest entry
- Attention, My Lovlies! by infinite spirit.
600 points, ended June 25, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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quite good, the repetition works well. ^_^
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Dolly
never be sorry for these:
I’m sorry that I’m still alive
I’m sorry that I care
I’m sorry that I gave us up
I’m sorry I was there
never ever ever dolly.
Your an awesome person. And if i ever saw u, i would never ever let u go.
xoxo
-alice
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I can relate to this one!
I’m sorry I couldn’t give it up
I’m sorry I couldn’t confess
I’m sorry I couldn’t make you smile
I’m sorry for this mess
I’m sorry how I loved you
I’m sorry how you knew
I’m sorry how you kept on going
I’m sorry that we’re through
Man, if I had a dime every time these words came out of my mouth!
Very well done!
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u are awesome
u did this better then i did...i recognise some lines but its kool...your and awesome writer XD...luv ya
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Wow.So simple yet so touchy.This is superb.Following are my fav lines
"I’m sorry because I still need you
I’m sorry because you still make me smile
I’m sorry because you still make me cry
I’m sorry you’re making it all worthwhile"
Apart from these lines i've some more lines to quote
"I’m sorry that I still need you
I’m sorry that I still depend on you
I’m sorry that I still believe you
I’m sorry I can’t believe we’re through"
This is really really beautiful and I can relate these lines with me.
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