I ask you, where exactly is HELL?
For everyone there is a different answer.
If you ask me, It is here on Earth.
For me, there is no other answer.
Death is the final release, the sheer ecstasy, the final orgasm that we have all been waiting for from the life that most of us live.
If HELL is not on Earth then why will
most people do almost anything to escape reality?
One moment you feel that you are living in complete bliss, or so you think, and the next like a demon ripping your heart out while it's still pumping, right out of your chest leaving a bloody, gaping wound never to be filled, your like has changed, and you find yourself drowning, not knowing what to do, so you just keep on breathing as hard as it may be. Life, never to be as you thought it would.
Changed into utter HELL ... here on Earth.
But you try to go on, it is excruciating, but you try.
Just to get out of bed in the morning feels like an impossibility, but we try and some succeed.
Then ... One day, when you least expect it, a surprise comes into your life.
Is it Good?
Bad?
Or Both.
Only time will tell ..... This is Hell.
As I sit and think about my life at this very moment in time, I feel happy again!
But, what if it is all a dream, just to be awakened by the demons that want to eat me alive.
To destroy me.
This to me is HELL.
Here on Earth.
A contest entry
- even the wicked can love occasionally by unraveled.
450 points, ended July 21, 2007, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Darker Than The Abyss by DancingShadowCorpse.
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Another interesting poem I have come across in this contest. It is well written and the honesty of it all is what makes it so dark. Thank you for entering!
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well i definatly agree with that that this is hell,, great write, thats for entering my contest and good luck! -
i honestly have no idea whatsoever how this relates in the least to the contest prompt. it's just an emo prose about hell on earth. if you wanted to improve this you could go for some imagery that's not cliche like "ripping your heart out" thank you for entering,
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very deep
your thoughts on hell are very deep.. I know trudging through this life can be hell but thankfully we do have friends to keep us balanced.. thanx gianna for sharing your deepest thoughts... thanks for being a friend...
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wow. I've never really thought of it like that. I guess in some ways I agree with you. You portrayed some thoughts that I haven't really been open about before. But there were other things that I didn't agree on. You really get the reader thinking, which always is a very good thing!
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Snow White Queen
Thank you for all of your comments. It is the first time anyone has said anything besides "Huh" or "Nice". Honesty is what I need. HELL is the first poem I have written here (I am new) I want to read your poems, how do I do that? Again, thank you. Warmest Wishes, Gianna
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