the elbow is connected to the arm bone
the arm bone is connected to the hand
the hand is connected to the fingers
and the fingers are connected to the keyboard
the keyboard is connected to the mind
Author notes
Option E5
I know it's simple
but I just went with my gut said.
I took the pic.
A contest entry
- Weird Options Contest by Kimojuno.
456 points, ended July 12, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like it, it's simple yet it shows the object perfectly, and yes the keyboard is connected to
the mind. This is a great pick and a great contest entry - perfect is all I have to say. -
Ultra~Original
By golly, I think you've hit the nail on the head! It's a computerized world and you've used the idea of an old song and brought it into this frenzied high tech world we live in. Although I really think the connection between the keyboard and a person's brain short circuits every now and then. Shouldn't be surprised, that's the way some people talk
This is funny and true at the same time. Best wishes in the contest.
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Thank you!
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Hehe this is gorgeous, read in tune with original song and its bloody brillant!! Nicely done!!
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Thank you!
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Great Poem
You have penned a great poem. Short but says alot. We are so connected by mind and heart with the computer and the relationships and information it brings us. Wonderful poem and a pleasure to read. Take care, Sandy
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Thank you so very much. My laptop as basically become my window to the world and my means of expression. I use to to write and store all of my poetry, and short stories as well as to store and share all of my photography and to communicate into the world or imagination. Thanks for your comment. It's highly appriciated!
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