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Bubble

Laugh--
it blooms
(inflating)
My heart, bursting
my pride (just the way
a balloon POPS!) Knowing
and gentle-- So this, absurd
awkward thing, is love? We know best--
And my heart soars to see you blossom

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Wonderful week.

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  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    June 19, 2007
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    This is a lovely nonet, a story of love told with gentle humor.