leaves taken from a tree
falling down under my path
the unholy hears me walk
stepping over dead words
reasons to love are gone
as i sit crying in the dark
dark green my eyes turn
as i weep my tired soul out
wont you take me to Eden?
let me ride upon your wings
fly away from the summoned storm
away from everything i never thought before
A contest entry
- Sadness and Darkness by My Darkness.
600 points, ended June 26, 2007, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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a may you find your solitude... this is hopeful, so much sadness is felt in this, great job to bring in the hope.. thanks for entering and good luck!
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Great write
This is a great write, I love the imagery here and "dark green my eyes turn
as i weep my tired soul out"
this would have to be my favorite line. great job!
keep the ink flowing
~L_D_P~
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This is heartbreaking, such a lovely poem.
"wont you take me to Eden?"
I love this line.
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