Searing lips reforming souls
Plasmatic quakes mounting
Bodies summit, rising spurs
Spiraling down from ecstatic pleasures
Grasping moist skin raining
Heated moans amidst jugular bites
Limbs like asp, bold in embrace
Charred ecstasy, smoke conceals fire
Tongue tango, samba in honey running
Soft sweeps waggle torso to back door
Arched surrender, peaked tips ache
Breaths gale whispers softly
Cold fusion flames ignite infernos
Cylindrical rise like full moon
Plummeting like westward sun
Nectar rising to fleshes rain falling
Sounds barrier broken in roars rippling
Like the tide going out to sea
Subsiding...
In quakes fading
In a list
A contest entry
- Give me Erotic by Swan song.
480 points, ended July 21, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Limbs like asp, bold in embrace
Mmm ! sets the scene perfectly as did the rest of this saucy poem.
Great write
Julie
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Wow. This is - hotter than steamy.
I love the way you used nature for each move.
Well done. ~Pamela
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The words in this are an excellent choice, for it speaks volumes, especially taken the title you used. Nicely done. Thank you for entering and good luck Storm
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Very nice!!! Loved the descriptiveness and the subtle images...best of luck to you!
Blessings,
Azlyn
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Tastefully (should I use that word, you sick kids!) done here with such an elegance I forgot it was erotica...except for the need for a smoke afterwards..well done....Good luck!
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wow an erotic poem thats actually very poetical in its own write...and yet still really really hot....now that is rare....mmmmm i like very much
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WOW
Someone has a crush
This is just hot,hot,hot,
Blessings
~Cheryl~ -
Blessing!
You're just a heated pleasure with pen in tow.. How could I not hold you.... let your ink spill over my senses.. Transform them....let them simmer to a sweet thickness..like sugar carmalizing...under a slow boil.......
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Very nicely done erotica; tasteful yet sizzling
Thank you for sharing; I wish you the very best in the contest! -
I think my volcano just erupted...
Very well done and a great concept indeed, good luck in the contest...Scott
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