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The Sweet Cry

The sweet sounding cry
In the dark full mooned night
Its all I need and I...

Remember all the screaming
In the home of redemption
He is coming, that is the warning

He is risen its no surprise
Even God would be reborn
For pleasures of the flesh

I sold my soul
The world sucked me barren, dry
I have no soul

Messiah save me, please
Don't leave me, please
Wheres your patience for me?

No forgiven souls, none rest
Now I am blind, I cant survive
The cycotus has me

It will eat me alive

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  • Despairkitty
    June 18, 2007

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    "He is risen its no surprise
    Even God would be reborn
    For pleasures of the flesh"

    Ok, this is now my favorite piece of yours Cast. Brilliant. Bloody Brilliant!!!! Wow.. what more can i say.
    Despair