Intensity beyond
anything I've ever known
I'm taken by her
tasted;
"so-totally"
swallowed whole
Nothing ever so sweet
I'm so glad we could meet
intertwined to our feet
inseparable;
marring defeat
from the day
while we play
she takes me away
and the paradise of oblivion
I find myself in
is sultry and soft
and soaked in sin
Playfully
Forcefully
she commands my attention
and turns me upside down,
inside my dimension
What of this weakened flesh of mine,
captivated by the chills in my spine?
Could fruit be ripened on the vine?
Could the snake be hissing at the divine?
Could I do it again with just one more sip of wine?
Collapsing
Relapsing;
Tremors of unrest quake within my loins.
Fetal grasp of ownership,
so grateful we're adjoined
Never forget this place
Unconditional love's embrace
Still lingering;
the taste
of her.
A contest entry
- Sizzling and Sultry by Heavenly Angel.
1000 points, ended June 29, 2007, 13 entries
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SEXY AT IT'S BEST!
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Well written
Great write, so much passion. I enjoyed this. It was different from what I'm used to writing. Thanks for commenting on my poem, through the eyes of a teenager.
You are very talented.
-Stormy-
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Excellent!
Thanks for your comment on my work Things would have been different. It was for my Father who I lost when I was an year old. And I feel I really miss him alot on FATHER'S DAY!
Take care,
Pretty.
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OOOH La La...NICE!
This is steamy and I love it! Great write!
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Nicely done
Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest; I wish you the very best
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