rickety breathing
trees loom over us, watching
puzzle piece perfection
sun rested on horizon
sighs carefully exhaled
moments are dragged out
lived to their full potential
air is doused in love
and we light up each other
radiant to all who see
Author notes
thank you Bearhug. <3 It's for you.
A contest entry
- It is Tanka Time by Swan song.
450 points, ended June 17, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
it's pretty amazing, eh?
Comments
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Very good seperate the poems so it makes a break youhave wonderful imagery here
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