fervor
to clean abode,
the riotous rinsing
of organic debris off floor,
dissension between children at breakfast,
incursion of mother-in-law,
officious omen
to scrub with more
fervor
Author notes
*yikes!*
rictameter
words: fervor, abode, riotous, organic, dissension, incursion, officious
A contest entry
- ~ Word Bank Anyone?~ by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended June 29, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you for joining in our contest we hope that you will join us in the next round, there are two more word banks before the winners of all three compete against each other, hope to see you keep trying,
Warm thoughts
Tearz -
THis is too cute! I so enjoyed it! Thanks for entering and best wishes in the contest!
Frogz~ -
Yikes Indeed!
This was simply excellent. I remember these days only too well. LOL. Superb use of words. ~Pamela
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lolol, how too funny and what a scene getting ready!!
and you used all those words from the word bank, too, wow. Best to you in the contest, this was a delightful, fun read, thanks!
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LOL, boy do I remember the days of children and food. This made me laugh, very well done.
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no yikes lol you had me laughing,
a wonderful job of using the word bank,
this tells a tale
amazing work kiddo,
Love and Light
tearz
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very nice poem susan, you would flipped if i walk in your door as unexpected company, you might chase me out the door with a rolling pin. J/K
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