It was all so delusional,
the way you walked into my life
and have stolen my heart;
I ache.
This love has been edgy;
complacent and domineering,
you shower in gold
but your shadow is where I reside.
Each day I wake up
beckoning for more,
and as your heart weakens
so does my soul.
A love so strong;
never enough,
but you can have it all.
Author notes
Option One
I feel I have died, and was born again, for the love of my life. This is the best way I can express that.
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This poem strikes me differently from how your author notes explain. I feel like this is someone that feels they are in the shadows and not worthy while the one they love (or think they love) is doing there own thing, not really paying attention to them. Very well written!!!
whisper
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Bravo, loved it.
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aww that's really sweet. i like the honesty in here. great job.
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