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The Cat


Basking in the window's light
She'll have no snark from you
For she is queen, queen of her house
and you...you just live here.
You don't exist to her,
save maybe to give her food
and pet her,
and give her balls of yarn.
But other than that...
you're just living here.

Ah, the life of the household cat.

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Because mine is currently eating my dinner.

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  • roolbreaker
    February 25

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    i didnt know you owned a cat.

    unless i forgot,in which case.talk about putting so much feeling into such a little sapce,i guess thats the name of the game,a classic poem,


  • diruparadise
    May 26, 2008
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    i luv my cat, soo true. she does rule the house. such a cute little poem! i luved it^_^


  • infinite spirit
    June 25, 2007

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    *laughs* quite amusing, but i wonder what would happen if you took this same concept and filled it out a bit more? the simplicity here is great. i dont know why this piece just seems a bit sparce. i like it though. ^___^


    • yumesandman
      June 26, 2007
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      Lol, it's probably a bit sparce because I wanted to change my style, and you know how I ramble on and on. ^_^

      But thankies Mar-chan