Roaring across the heavens in my Harley.
Chasing the Hot Chick Angels.
As they spread their wings of love.
Blessed are the skies.
That I roam throughout the clouds.
With wings upon my Harley.
Traveling the gate of happiness.
Mounted on the dreams of an eternity.
Chrome wheels with my leather tunic.
Barefooted a magical dream.
Me and my Hog
Death is a sweet delight.
I’am off to join a sweet Angel.
Ramming my engine across the skies.
Only Angel dust you’ll see.
From the stars that I leave behind.
Author notes
I enjoy riding Motorcycles alot. But my brother is the crazy one he always tells me that he is going to take his. Harley to Heaven with him to ride around with the Hot Angel Chicks. So I was thinking of him and wrote this for him. For Darryl My little Brother.
A contest entry
- Write whatever you want !! Winner takes all !!! by fierra.
300 points, ended June 26, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow this is fantastic full of beautiful images congrats on the silver
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Thank you glad you liked it,
LISA
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Congratulations on winning the silver trophy with this wonderful poem, you were certainy deserving and more. Just an excellent write and a real pleasure to read as always.
D.D.M.
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Thank you my friend it was just a little tribute to my younger brother, LISA
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Sweet poetic ride through the heavenly skies, thanks for sharing, pen on sweet soul..Thanks for sharing!
Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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Well if any one ride one they know what it feels like and never wanting to give it up. Not even in Heaven, thanks you LISA
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yippy yi ya
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Thank you but that's unsual when you ride a horse not a harley. hehehe LISA
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winged Harley...
Worthy trophy winner! Quite a dream to have... I always wanted a Harley too! -
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Well we don't know what waits for us in Heaven, So why not dream, right Thank you for your great review, well appreciated. LISA
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Awsome write!!! Keep up the good work and feel free to check out my page anytime!!! Jes
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Thank you for a great review dear LISA
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I loved the imagery in this, you have a great imagination. HUGS xonesugarx
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Thank you sis for the three harley riding angel, and your comments. LISA
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Imagination
Wow, you have a wonderful imagination! What a beautful poem. You are so creative and you must ride a Harley or know someone who does. I love the ending!!
"Ramming my engine across the skies.
Only Angel dust you’ll see.
From the stars that I leave behind." -
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My brother and I both ride but my husband don’t like me to ride any more for he’s afraid that I will kill my self. My brother told me one day that he was going to take his Harley to heaven when he died. So I thought of this to write for him. Thank you for reading and glad you enjoyed it Love (LISA)
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I love this! The imagery is amazing and subconciously I was sitting there watching a Harley take off in the sky. Wicked.
"Ramming my engine across the skies
Only Angel dust you'll see.
From the stars that I leave behind."
That's got to be my favourite part. well done. <3
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Thank you so much I am glad you enjoyed it. And thank you for such a amazing review. may be in heaven we can ride the motorcycle. (LISA)
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Dewd this is good!
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Thank you for the Bunnnies greatly appreciated (LISA)
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Nice poem!! I like the imagery of your brother riding his Harley around in heaven...it ws my Grandads funeral today and he was a HUGE moterbike lover. This poem is so well written that it made me think of my grandad in heaven on his very own bike!! I love the way you resisted a rhyme scheme, I feel it made the poem seem more real...if you know what I mean. My favourite line was....
'Chrome wheels with my leather tunic.
Barefooted a magical dream.'
I think this links the fundamental ideas of heaven and riding a moterbike tremendously well. Nice write. Keep up the good work
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Wow I am so sorry for you loss I am sure he meant a lot in your life. By the way you speak about him. I am sure he is still riding his bike in heaven with all his family and friends up there. Having a Grand reunion. Thank you for your review. Yes I know I like to write a lot of rhyme but I thought in this write it would be better free style. thanks (LISA)
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when i read your author's notes, i thought of my former pastor. his brother is Darryl and he loves to ride bikes. it's crazy. nice beautiful poem.
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Wow that's great that you can relate this to someone you know and care for. Thank you for reading my write. (LISA)
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I REALLY LOVE THIS. VERY CUTE AND IMAGINARY. LOLuck ON THE CONTEST
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Thank you for reading it. Glad you liked it. (LISA)
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i love it. I really do. I'm crazy about motorbikes too an d love this idea of heaven. The freedom of a bike, the feeling you get its all here. Its fantastic I love it!
I love the second stanza, its my favourite of the whole poem. Amazing job!
Vikki
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Yea, Can you imagine riding the skies and go as fast as you like with out any rules of speed. And no helmet. Maybe there are rules in heaven and speed limits JAJAJA Thank you for you great review *Hug* (LISA)
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Definitely a unique perspective of heaven, I like where you took this poem, it made a very interesting read But you certainly did capture the freedom that comes with motorcycle riding I hope your brother likes this poem, great write!
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He did thank you for your great review and glad you enjoyed it. (LISA)
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I’am off to join a sweet Angel.
Ramming my engine across the skies.
Only Angel dust you’ll see.
From the stars that I leave behind.
Humm..you are great poet..and a great sister as well..well done
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Its was fathers day and I really never had a father so I wrote this for my brother. He thought it was great too. He liked the way I wrote. "Chrome wheels with my leather tunic.
Barefooted a magical dream." He said he can imagine him self in a Tunic. for he is 6'2". Thank you My brother for that is what I feel you are. So are always so very supportive. Like a brother. Love (Lisa)
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It's a unique poem...very creative of you...i like how you descibe it...i can picture it on my head...i could feel the happiness...i like to read poems about death,but never have i read a poem like this...good job!
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Wow thank you so much
Thank you for the Silver I am really Flattered. This write was in honor of my brother because he always tells me that when he dies he will take his bike with him to ride in heaven. So he can ride the Angel chicks. Glad you enjoyed it. (LISA)
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I like that so you own a harley that is just too cool and this is an excellent poem
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I use to but as I got older my husband told me I was going to kill my self on it. But I still ride for my brother has a few. He's the reason for this write. He tells me he wants to be buried with the Bike. We will need to coffens. He's just crazy. Thank you for your comments Love (Lisa)
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