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Little child and the final battle

For open gates
Let the gaurds
Lower their Fort
For a graceful smile
Shines upon them.

Small ones alive
Dance, dance!
It's the wrong path to take
Climb and climb
But will a halfling fall?

The ring calls
Can you resist?

He can hear it's call
Closer and closer
A fate looms
A final battle
A final death?

Only one,
One white light can lead
Burden....
Heavy
Lies with one child
A final call
Will the child lead
Will he...
Will he save the world as we know it
But no,
A tear will not save us.

Cold, cold dear child
Sleep....
for there is one last battle to fight.

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  • lucy sky-diamond
    July 7, 2007

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    a really wonderful poem, so very beautiful, i love the way you have used such vivid imagery. thank you very much for this entry, and best of luck
    lucy
    xxx