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I cant do this anymore
I cant sit here and pretend
to be ok with everything
when ovbiously im not
you look right at me
yet you never see me
you listen when i speak
yet you never hear me
what must i do to show you
im not just some object
you can fuck around with
once you break my heart
you cant just pick up the
pieces and put them together again
expecting everything to be perfect
there will be certain parts missing
that will never be the same...
im sick of feeling as if
im always doing wrong
never being able to speak
my mind because it'll piss you off
youre hypocritical
and you always blow up in my face
yet im the one chasing you
begging to make things right
im tired of the apologies
and the repetative lines
i cant do this anymore
im losing my mind
im on my last straw
i just pray it wont break
i love you to death
but i dont know how much
more i can take
is love enough...
please let me know
before its too late
before i let you go

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  • The Hardest Goodbye
    June 20, 2007
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    This is a awesome poem good luck in my contest!


  • The Hardest Goodbye
    June 17, 2007
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    This was a great poem. I enjoyed reading it, and you have such a way with words, you are very talented keep up the awesome work! my favorite part was when you said "i love you to death, but i don't know how much more i can take" that was wonderful. loved it so much!