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My Love

You slip into my room,
As a wolf creeps after His prey.

As bright orange bursts across the sky.
And birds sing a good night song.

"We have no time to waste"
I feel the whispered statement as i nod off to sleep.

Feeling my blanket lift up,
And a male's hand caress my leg and up onto my thighs,
As if they were satin sheets.

I feel the silken moist lips
Trailing behind those soft hands that were once leather.

Slipping up into my gown
To tease my soft breasts
And up to take what i had off.

I open my eyes
To the surprise of teeth
Nippling my skin in arousal.

"we must hurry"
I hear again from the raspy bass voice of my lover.

As our teasing ends
You slip yourself into me,
Claiming again that we must hurry.

Thinking this is only a game
For I know I truly love you
And you I.

As we reach our climax together
A howl escapes your lips
As a beam of moonlight descends into my room.

As the man i love
Turns into something unhuman.
His last words were
"Run, my love!"

As a creature bursts forth
Hearing that of cracking bones
And the heavy heaves of a beast.

I start to scream and turn
Only once did i look back at my lover.
And that's when i seen all humanity die in those eyes of his.

Although he has turned
Turned into a beast of the full moon.
I will never again love another like  I have him.

And i will marvel in the sounds of the wolves howl
For thinking of that one night with him
And wondering if he roams near where my homestead is.

Author notes

hpWICKEDangel: AP name

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Comments

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  • Lick On Her1275
    September 15, 2007

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    a very great way to express your poetic side and the creativity and the format of it all was very nice it was a pleasure to have me read your contest entry


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 14, 2007

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    wOW, THE wolf/ demon sure fooled a beautiful romance in both you and him,very different post, good luck in the contest..MM


  • Riftkin gold member
    August 10, 2007

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    wow, this is one hell of an amazing write you have shown the truth behind the werewolf lover in this piece. Thank you for writing such an awesome work here.

    Riftkin


  • Violent Serenity
    August 7, 2007

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    ooh my, this is excedingly well written, the words seeped off the page and into my bones. great job, keep it up and good luck in the contest!!


  • HerbalGoat
    August 6, 2007

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    Interesting piece. I am still prety shocked at what I just read, which is sort of a good thing. I like how you started out your poem. You kept the erotic down a bit, which I like in poetry; I do not like blatant erotic poetry with no meaning. I am not sure why you had your lover change into a werewolf, but that was also the great mystery behind it, and I liked that.

    Thanks for joining the ride!


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    August 1, 2007

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    this was a wonderfu write and fitted the option wonderfully
    i loved how you wrote this and it was so deep and full.
    a wonderful write
    well done and best of luck


  • MagazinesFall
    August 1, 2007

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    Wow. this was very interesting. I really enjoyed reading it, thanks for entering my contest and good luck!


  • panel
    July 31, 2007
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    Hi, I'm co judging architects contest. Congratulations on the trophys you've already won. But I don't think this piece is right for this contest. Thanks for entry, but I'll have to remove it as it just isn't what we're looking for. Thanks anyway and good luck with your writing.


  • Prinzessin Lilliana
    July 30, 2007

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    Fantastic!

    I really liked reading ur poem.At first it had a calm and serene atmosphere and then it all turned into horror.I love the way u ended ur poem.Very Subtle and convincing.
    Well done!


    • HpWICKEDangel
      July 30, 2007
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      thanks you, i was trying to go for that. the whole" i didnt see that coming" sorta ending.


  • opaqueangel
    July 27, 2007
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    Very well done and very imaginative. I enjoyed reading this imensely. Good luck in the contest.


  • Nephalaneous lover
    July 25, 2007

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    this is amazing...i love this so i'm not going to dq for the over the line limit,awsome poem, this is by far my favourite entry....next time plz follow the line limit....again great piece


  • Florida Sunshine
    July 19, 2007

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    Wow~ intense write~ or read ~ Nice job! I liked it! you did a beautiful job! Thanks for entering good luck to you!


  • Tenshi Asakura
    July 15, 2007

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    awesome! i really like that poem. the words you used to convey certain emotions were very skilful. i like the orginallity of it. the flow was just amazing and masterful. best of luck!


  • SandraMVeinot
    July 10, 2007

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    'My Love'...

    well talk of a different kind of love but this about sums it up...very much so!

    and thank you for sharing this with us your viewers...

    and all the best to you in this as well...


  • Lord Dracon
    June 22, 2007
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    Wow, really started great, then got even better as I read... This is awsome!


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    June 20, 2007

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    sorry i will have to remove this piece. I asked for nothing in such erotica, or sensual love. Althogh i like this, it was explained in the contest even though it had a great twist you have to read through the lovemaking. Sorry please reenter soemthing else,Thanks
    Tory...aka Vsutton


  • glued-to
    June 19, 2007

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    ok you really suprised me actually. by the label and such i was expecting pure erotica and dreading judging it, you suprised me very pleasantly. this was a very beautiful poem with an exciting twist at the end. I loved the urgency of it and how it flowed. good job. thank you for entering. good luck


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 18, 2007

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    Something very hot and erotic about bringing out the BEAST in someone
    Ooooh yeah!
    Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest!


  • tomisb
    June 16, 2007
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    Hmm, erotic, thiller, horror all rolled into one. done very nicely as well. Peace & Love, Tom B.


  • sweetestkiss1985
    June 16, 2007
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    Very erotic ans sensual. Great write and flow.


  • Lord Merlynn
    June 16, 2007
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    this is awesome, and I like how it flows. Great job on this.

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