A friend is one who keeps asking .
Ask me what I want .
I will only give .
Ask me what to do .
I will always say forgive.
Ask me where .
I will lead the way .
Ask me why .
I will say , go as not to stray .
Ask me how .
I will say, follow your heart .
Ask me when .
I will say time is a work of art .
Ask me how you are doing .
I will say your doing fine .
Ask me how I am doing .
I will be on cloud nine .
Author notes
friends
A contest entry
- Look deep into the contest!! >> OPTIONS by Dreams27.
600 points, ended July 1, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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And a big Amen to this one.!
Live, Great work again. I see you are coming out of you're dark phase fially ! That's great ! Remember that there;s a God out there who loves you and cares for you. Keep up the great work.
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Love it
I really like this poem. It's sweet and to the point. Thank you for writing it -
What a nice way of looking at friendship. We all need those who will keep asking!
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Excellent
Aww.
This is such an excellent write.
Friendship is the best thing ever.
Well done.
Keep up with the great work.
Keep on penning.
Thank you so very much for sharing.
*S* Cynthia
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I love these lines "Ask me how I am doing .
I will be on cloud nine ." Friendship is a two way street it only works if both are giving people. Great write
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Oh my friend!!!! This is brilliant. Your talent is amazing. You open your soul and allow the tenderness and pain and sorrow to flow onto the paper and it touches each and every person who reads it, in a very personal way. I am so proud to call you my friend. Good luck in the contest, this is a winner!
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aww...sweet write! i enjoyed reading, thanks for entering!! (one teeny ickle thing...you didnt put the option in the box...not that i cant tell which it is, just that i did state in the rules id warn people who didnt...great poem though) take care, sam (Dreams27) xxx
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