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Rainbow ribbons,
all over my hair,
given by the angels.
A charmed object,
full with colour of joy,
attracting luck like magnets,
helping though this hellish place,
I call my home,
where misery and pain is everywhere.

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  • layla.
    June 28, 2007
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    aww. I like the casual tone of this piece. And great work with the imagery, thanks for entering.

  • Diatribes
    June 16, 2007

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    This reminds of the parent who gives there child a beautiful brand new dress, t hide the bruise they also gave them.....