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Your Eyes Say It All

Your Eyes Say It All

  

 

When I’m with you

I need not speak

For all our speech

Is through our eyes!

 

I need not tell you

I can only show you

You need not tell me,

Just show me

 

Hush! Don’t talk!

Show me those portals

That do not lie,

But tell of your love.

 

Hush! You need not speak

For your eyes say all!

 

They do not lie,

They tell what is in your heart,

They tell only truth.

 

They make love to me,

They talk to me,

They comfort me..

Your eyes say it all!

  

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  • HopeForCysters
    July 13, 2008
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    nice, I love how you wrote about the eyes


  • Whispering-Night
    July 13, 2008
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    :)

    very pretty


  • onesugar gold member
    July 4, 2007

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    This is beautiful, you have portrayed two people that are so in love they don't need words. Excellent


  • Neon Lights
    July 1, 2007

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    This is a truly amazing poem. It's so easy to feel the love between the two people in this. The last stanza is my favorite. It really sums up what a person's eyes can do, and just what an important part they are in a relationship. I also love how you express that there is not always a need for words when two people are together. I think there are a lot of people who think words are necessary. Great job. Thanks for entering.
    ~Fiona~


  • yassmin
    June 17, 2007

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    yet eyes can lie too dear dont trustt them this much,lovely romantic write very sweet n delicate indeed


  • less than a poet
    June 17, 2007

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    They make love to me,

    They talk to me,

    They comfort me..

    Your eyes say it all!

    eyes r d portal of d soul amazin my friend


  • Wonderwhenitllrain
    June 17, 2007

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    Wow, that's really pretty.
    I just can't get over how pretty the part wen you say "Your eyes say all" is!
    I love how it's like you finnd connection in silence, in their eyes, but you can really tell that it's more than just that.
    Well, anyways, awesome job!
    Amber


  • celestial
    June 17, 2007

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    Well-written

    This is beautiful. I likehow you put that you can know what your lover is saying through the eyes. That's kind of romantic and cool, thinking about it. The verses flow freely, and it sets a good mood.


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    June 16, 2007

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    Wow, very sweet and loving.
    It's a wonderful feeling to have
    someone like this in your life.
    The eyes cannot only see but, can
    say a thousand words and hold many
    feelings that we sometimes cannot
    express. Beautiful work here and
    thanks for sharing it! Good luck
    to you with this one!




    Jeremy0826

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