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[ Blinded by love, ]

Blinded by love,
I was naive not to realize,
my love was unrequited.

Anger and hatred,
took control...
Hand grasped a chopping knife,
and blood,everywhere...

But why do I mourn,
when it's time for celebration?
Why guilt,not joy?
Why do I miss you,
still loving you...

I can't forget you...
Your smile...your warmth...your touch...
You destroyed my heart,
throwing it away like garbage.
You were unfaithful to me...

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Option two: write a poem about missing people you shouldn't miss, but who you do miss.

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  • MoonlightBeam
    June 26, 2007
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    wow, this is amazing I love it


  • Regenhart
    June 17, 2007

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    I LOVE these lines:
    "You destroyed my heart,
    throwing it away like garbage."

    It's so powerfull, and so true

    Thank you for entering!


  • Diatribes
    June 16, 2007

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    If only the (metaphorical) heart were as voluntary a muscle as the eyelid, fluttering to close automatically at something incandescent, yet able to be opened at will to see that the light is an approching train!

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