Tell me, so I won't have to worry anymore,
what it will be like, when they open Heaven's Door.
Will the angel's sing, a cheerful song,
will there be that feeling that nothing can go wrong?
Will she like where she will be staying?
and will she be able to watch as we keep growing?
Will she be able to smile at us from above,
but most importantly, will she still feel our love?
Will someone finally be able to help her understand,
why she had to leave this world so early, so unplanned?
Will there be others there to comfort her,
maybe some angels or maybe her father?
God, I have never asked you for much,
but please give her your warm and loving touch.
Help her to find happiness and peace,
and please, let her know,
our memory of her will never cease.
Author notes
This is what I would say in a prayer, if I were to pray...
This one's really personal for me. I always welcome honest critiques, but please don't flame this one.
And thanks to my friend Nick for helping me with the wording at certain parts. It made it a lot better with just minor adjustments!
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omfg this is the best fucking poem i have read in so long. im sorry about everything that happened. some one said to me once not to be sorry about the life youve lived but to live it to the fullest...i dont remember who said that!! but its cool righ
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This is beautiful and made me tear up so bad as i know this loss myself, Amazing way of expressing your love my friend and I am shore she is looking down and very proud.
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wow, tiffany when you said that you wrote a poem i had to get on the computer and check it out...sorry it took awhile. I found it really emotional. but it was a very well written poem. i think personally that the first part is pretty good....but what got me was the line "Will she be able to smile at us from above, but most importantly, will she still feel our love?" overall i like this poem it was good....
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Wow
This is really powerfull, there is nothing that i would change. Full of all the emotions and hopes for your mom after she passes.
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aww really good!!!!!!!
*cant think of anything to change!*
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amazing!
its..wow ive not spoke to u in awhile but your still better then ever
this is amazing..its touching words to pray for if u did pray i dont personally but its always good to knowwhat to say..anyway great write.. ~hugs~ from me!
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