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My Home Away From Home (Not an Entry)

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Rising from the mountain floor

Welcoming arms opened wide

Her gate ajar, never locked

Inviting all to come inside

 

 

Each guest is made to feel at home

With all quarters clean and bright

As all who enter feel the warmth

They know they’re welcome through the night

 

 

Even the ghost of Grandpa Wyles

His spector floating through the halls

Is kindly in his shimmering gait

His voice echoing from the walls

 

 

The beauty which surrounds this place

The solace of the forest, the trees

Somehow conveys each thought

Carried with the gentle breeze

 

 

If walls could speak they’d surely tell

Of happiness and fun found here

For this old castle, strong and true

Holds all of that which we hold dear

 

 

The sounds of life too long suppressed

Of joyous laughter, song and dance

Of tasty feasts, gourmet delights

And wondrous nights filled with romance

 

 

All of these things and more

Are part of Huguelot Castle, grand

Personified by our King and Queen

The best kingdom in all the land

 

 

Contest poem for Hugh Wyles Favourites

Dee Garner

© June 15, 2007

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • aboomer silver member
    August 22, 2007

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    Beautiful picture and beautiful words to go with it Loved the wording and the 'feel' you gave to this picture. Wish I could visit it after reading this. I love how you started - with the castle rising up out of the mountain - and all the imagaes that followed.
    Very nice write.

  • mcheadle
    July 1, 2007

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    is this quaint litt humble abode in Germany

    I have a friend he had toured some of thelittle houses last time he was over there good write very good write mac


    • catz Moderators member
      July 1, 2007
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      Yes, this is in Germany, the castle Burg Eltz between Koblenz and Trier on the Mozelle River.

      Thank you for reading and commenting on this piece.

      Dee


  • MargaretG
    June 26, 2007

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    I'm impressed by your presentation of the legends of Huguelot, Dee, and the verses are lovely and easy to read. Grandpa Wyles speaks? We must listen closely!


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    June 23, 2007

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    Very nice

    Makes me want to live there...I love the line "If walls could speak they'd surley tell" ...boy could all walls tell a lot...good thing they can't...so why is this no an entry? It is really nice...


  • leo2
    June 23, 2007

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    Sounds like a place I would like to visit sometime. I saw that this was not an entry but I wish you well in future ventures and fantasies anyway.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • Yemassee gold member
    June 22, 2007

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    I like how you introduced the castle...as rising from the ground...gives the readers the feeling of the castle's size and grandeur.

    Big deal the gate is never locked, he has those burly armed guards out front who won't let me and Yem in.

    How come we never hear from Edna? I want Hugh to make her speak...prod her with a stick maybe! No wonder he won't let me in, lol.

    That ghost...I think it's just Hugh in a white sheet...

    Despite my silliness I found the poem quite good.

    • catz Moderators member
      June 22, 2007
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      Nice comment, Yem Thank you. Yeah, I know, Edna doesn't ever say anything but I have a feeling it's because Hugh wont allow it. He's deathly afraid that she'll tell us who REALLY runs things around the castle and ruin his image completely. As for the stick prodding, me thinks it's the other way around

      It occured to me that it could be Hugh running around in a white sheet, not really grandpa's ghost... but I don't think Hugh could keep his feet off the ground that long

      Thanks again for the comment and for reading

      Dee


  • Maureen silver member
    June 20, 2007

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    Loved it!

    You've written a great poem 'bout the castle we all love. A better home and meeting place I could ne'er dream of!



    ♥ Maureen


  • jenelda silver member
    June 19, 2007

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    dear Dee,
    Marevellous! I do love the way you have described our fantastic Castle. It sure is a pleasure to visit there and see everyone again. Join in the festivities. What a blast we have.
    Love Jen.


  • gaze
    June 17, 2007

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    Absolutely great! You gave colour and life to the Castle Dee, in a wonderful way As Hine said, we won't feel like leaving when we get there.
    Excellent work!


  • Hinemoa silver member
    June 17, 2007

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    Our Castle is great!

    OHH Dee, Our Castle certainly is a beautiful place and Heath and I love going there whenever we can get away. Very beautiful Dee.
    Love Hine.


  • angelica silver member
    June 17, 2007

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    That's our Castle!

    AWWWW Dee, You've described our grand Castle beautifully. We have had some great times there and will again in the future. Especially now Hugh's Grandpa has settled down after causing all the rucus before. I love it Dee!
    Joan


  • fleur de lys
    June 16, 2007

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    Dear Dee

    You have certainly captured the beauty and essence of Huguelot Castle in this wonderful poem and I enjoyed every word. Thank you for your lovely write.

    Hugs and love,
    Petratani

  • Ir.muse
    June 16, 2007

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    hi my lovely mama

    wow...this is really beautiful. One could easily imagine being there.
    Love you

    Shahrzad


  • Saint Merman
    June 16, 2007
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    Oops "Huguelot"

  • Saint Merman
    June 16, 2007

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    Exceeds Expectations

    I imagined myself walking into one of Tamora Pierce's books. (Don't know if you've read anything by her, she's fantastic!) It was a very taste-filled poem. Vivid and springing with the right choice of words. I imagined it to be a bit on the scale of Arthurian Legends, which is great for any poem. You've done Hugelot Castle well. Much luck in the contest Dee!


  • hugh wyles silver member
    June 16, 2007

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    Oh! Dear, Dear Dee,

    This poem has my old eyes watering for you have truly captured, in your verses, my vision of our castle with its echoes of harmonious companionship and warm welcome. This was the aura which I felt each time I set foot within its pannelled walls. One could almost hear the sounds of age-old merriment, the strumming of a harp and the gentle crooning of a minstrel.
    The great table in the dining hall was set as though awaiting the seating of Lords and Ladies before a sumptuous feast accompanied by copious draughts of the best Rhine wines with which the knights would rise, flagons held st arms' length as they proposed each others' good fortune and health.
    May such an atmosphere prevail amongst us all as we inhabit these time-honoured halls in our imagination.
    Thankyou for this truly wonderful and evocative poem.
    Love and hugs, XXX Hugh (R.)

    • catz Moderators member
      June 16, 2007

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      Thank you, Hugh, for such a generous comment. I think I remember you telling us which castle this is for real and where it's located but I've forgotten... wanna refresh my memory. I'm sure the other members would like to know as well

      Dee

      • hugh wyles silver member
        June 16, 2007
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        Dear Dee,

        Burg Eltz (now known to us as Huguelot) stands on a rocky promontory above the Moselle river in the Rhineland area of Germany, between Koblenz and Trier.
        The history of the castle can be found if you type Burg Eltz into GOOGLE search.
        Love and hugs, XXX Hugh.

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