The skin on your face
Is as soft as silk
On bare skin
But I want to feel
The blood below
I want to feel
The warm blood
Pouring into my hands
Antisipating the taste
Of a metallic satisfaction
That makes you scream
Gives me chills
A contest entry
- pick and choose your dark side by SoftlyScreaming.
600 points, ended June 20, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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nice poem you goth there but i have to agree with mywristhurts that the name would probably be better suited to vampire. you tend to think blood with them while with Cannibal's you tend to think of hunks of flesh and bones, even though you've said blood lust.
i loved this poem and the way it was set out and iwish you the best of lukc in this contest.. you might however be interesting in entering this contest (yes its mine but i need more entries)
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2351278
anyways0- hope you can enter that
Claire-Anne -
honestly, i dont know what to write to this.. the title seems like it should be more like a vampire than a cannibal.. because it talks about.. well it just seems that way.. i understand where you're coming from and wanting to be different, this is just really out there for me.. anyways..
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