and i love the way
my life is slowly
turning into a fabrication of
Black&White photos
shoved in a shoe box....
at the very back of your closet.
Author notes
im not sure if this is what you were looking for exactly..but it's not cliche and its new.
so im hoping you enjoy it.
DQ if not happy.
♥
2nd contest.
4. Stained Photograph
i wasn't sure if we were supposed to use the option as the title..if we were can you just im and ill change it.
A contest entry
- Love [not a cliche contest] QUICKIE by Tangled Angle.
300 points, ended June 16, 2007, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 10x10x10 = PIF Challenge by Honesty Abounds.
450 points, ended July 20, 2007, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Fiesta! - For my Favourites - by Never Fall in Love.
1250 points, ended March 13, 2008, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very short...but lovely all the same.
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I agree with Ryan and Tyler below - you have the dirty pretty that doesnt make me want to puke on first view. Brilliant write
Never ♥
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hehehehe
and thank god for that.
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sad...but lovely
i like it a lot
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i love this alot bby. such a brilliant write!
xoxo
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awww. thanks lovely
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-alexsis
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Aww this is so beautiful and cute yet sad at the same time. I don't see how you could ever become anyone's memory; you're wayyy too special for that to ever happen. ILY!♥
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<3 thank you baby
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yeah that is the worst-- but you've described it so well and simply.
congrats on the bronze m'dear!!
xx crash.♥s.crash
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Aw, I hate becoming someone's memory. It's not even a memory they'll keep with them every day ... just one of those "oh yeah, I forgot about" when they come across something that reminds them of you. Argh, it frustrates me. Nice little write.
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I love the odd dirty pretty poem if it is written like you have. Good job; Loved the phrasing that made the poem.
Ryan
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Awww, short and sad.
I've never read a dirty pretty poem before, but among my circle of friends on here most don't like it- doesn't have a good reputation. lol
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why thank you.
i enjoy contests like these.
the reason most people dont like dir.r.ty.pretty is because they aren't reading the original material...before a bunch of adolescents got ahold of it and decided they wanted to destroy it with 5th grade grammer and excessive punctuation, that doesnt flow..
hehe.
ranting. sorry.
thanks for taking the time to comment.
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LOL nice.
Really though, your poem wasn't that bad.
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i switched to dirty pretty recently...
but i have other poetry that's mostly freebased or rhyme.
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