The medium:
Sun has risen, it is another day.
On the surface everything seems normal.
Those ghostly lost souls, can't keep them at bay.
In fact everything is so abnormal,
your life controlled by the paranormal.
You see daily what others cannot see.
The departed communicate with thee.
Steven Beesley (c)
Submission date : 2005-10-17
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Rime Royale/Rhyme Royal:
A poem containing 7 lines with 10 syllables per line. The rhyme scheme is ababbcc.
Please tell me what you think
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thats trippy man. both the punch line at the end and the rhyme pattern. its great, ive never come across a format like that... 7 lines, 10syllables each, thats gotta be hard with that rhyme pattern.
Well done, i love the write and well, i guess, KEEP writting..lol
Claire-Anne
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