Belief
of conviction
speak out information
anger or support you shall reap.
Notion
Moral
rule of conduct
stand up for wrong doing
for those having strong principles.
Ethic
Journey
by your passage
accepting of knowledge
will bring forth your path of travel.
Voyage
Author notes
Cinquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of twenty-two syllables distributed
as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2, in five lines
Line 1: Noun
Line 2: Description of Noun
Line 3: Action
Line 4: Feeling or Effect
Line 5: Synonym of the initial noun.
I wrote about truth, 3 stanza's. All three stanza's are in relations to what truth is all about! I hope you like~ This was tougher than what I thought it would be.
In a list
A contest entry
- Form Poetry -- Round Two. Invite Only. by Porcelain Princess.
300 points, ended July 1, 2007, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is the reason why I like you and why I trust you. You just don't find people like you anymore around!
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Well done. The creativity and imagery are perfect. A joy to read. Always a pleasure to read the work of a neighbor. Thanks for a wonderful experience.
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awesomely done!
i would have NEVER been able to think up all those first and last line words without using a Thesaurus!
good luck~
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Good write keep up the good work. Want to hear more poetry like this. Good luck with your writes.
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Wonderful
What a great use of the form Very creative. Best of luck in the contest.
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Hooray! You got it! And the poem looks and sounds all that much better for it. Great work, I appreciate your dedication to perfecting your poetry!
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This is a beautiful poem, I like it a lot. However, I'm a little iffy about your second stanza. A cinquain is noun, then description of a noun, and so forth. 'Faithful' is an adjective. If you're finding it difficult to work with and change around, let me know and I'll accept it, but please do try and change it. Otherwise, your poem is lovely.
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lol Your right~ Whatcha think of this simple flip~ lol all seems to fit now.
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Better, but 'sincere' is also an adjective and is not really a synonym of 'duty'.
I feel like I sound really rude and picky, so if these comments are coming off that way I apologize greatly. -
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LMAO~ This is round 2 ~ Dang if by the grace of God I make it further ~ I'll be bald from pulling my hair out~ LMAO~ Trust me.... I AM having a complete BLAST!!!
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OMG no~ I appreciate the 3 cents! it's all helps educate in the long run! Hang tight.... i'm fixing it now (/BIG GIANT HUGS) ....
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Your form is - Cinquain. Good luck!
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