Cant find me
[lost the path]
Getting stuck;tangled
In these piercing thorns
Dont know what im doing
['cept self destructing]
On these memories
And the ones Im making
Queen of bad choices
You cant take my throne
Even with all these self.help
Lectures your throwing
in.my.FACE!
Malnurished;still not eating enough
Keep your damn accusations to
yourself because
its.my.life
S-E-X
It happens to the best
of all of us
Especially with the
W-O-R-S-T
Lost my mind
cant think any longer
Cant help but think
Im f..a...d....i...n..g
[away]
Author notes
im so far gone, and i cant see where i came from
And she's back...kind of (i know you've been waiting)
Comments
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wow! this is really great! I love it!
"Cant find me
[lost the path]
Getting stuck;tangled
In these piercing thorns"
--I have been feeling like this lately. A hole I can't seem to dig myself out of.
"Queen of bad choices
You cant take my throne
Even with all these self.help
Lectures your throwing
in.my.FACE!"
--I like the angry emotion in this part. The reader can really feel what you're saying.
As always, amazing poem. Keep writing!
[[Jessica]]
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Thanks
Well, everyone experiences lows in their lives, and ive hit one, and it seems like you have too. They suck but most likely they will fade in time. I'm glad you could feel my emotion on the 3rd verse, that is really important to me, because there is a lot of emotion behind it....
Thank you for motivating me to still write
B.Blair
The crazy one
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