There once was a duck
Who was down on his luck
Left with only a buck
And an old pick up truck
Covered in rusty messy muck
Filled with old used hockey pucks
He said, "Ya know, this kinda sucks."
Author notes
Just something I made up on the spot to make my sister laugh. She was having a bad day and I was writing some poetry. When I tried to give her a pep talk she just kinda blew me off, so I called her a duck. Then she wanted me to tell her a story and this is what came out. She laughed for hours. I hope you like it!
Did I get you to laugh?
Comments
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redo: Now the folks down in town
All call him a Quack
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How about following the first 4 lines with something like....
He swapped the old Ford
for a snake oil rack
All the folks down in town
Now call him a quack!
How lucky she is to have such a loving and creative sister! Great to use your talent to lift others!
Hugs,
Ma -
You're silly. To answer your question, I didn't laugh, or even smile. I think it's one of those things you have to be there for. The first two lines are fine, but the rest of the poem is so pointless that I lost interest. But I love you anyhow.
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