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Here I Go Again

I keep dreaming of the past,
Walking old familiar paths,
I'm caught between the fine line,
Of the damned and the salvation,
And only time makes beggars of us all.

I was thinking of the time,
When life and death was one conversation,
And spoken with the absolute devotion,
So that now when I sleep,
I can still here them call.

So to all of you I pledge this prayer,
Made in the hope that someone really cares,
But only if you promise
Not to weep at my salvation
Here I go again, Here I go.

I just caught a glimpse of you,
Passing through a life that went askew,
And all of the reasons,
Couldn't change a single thing,
Since the excuses I made were all in vain.

So to all of you I pledge this prayer,
Made in the hope that someone really cares,
But only if you promise
Not to weep at my salvation
Here I go again, Here I go again,
Here I go again, here I go...

Author notes

"Love is not a victory march, it's a cold and
it's a broken hallelujah" Hallelujah by Leonard Cohen

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  • mitchybaby
    August 31
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    Great write! Thank you for entering and good luck

  • xofightinirishx3
    April 15, 2008
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    liked this one...good use of emotion and metaphors. thanks for entering and good luck


  • islekine gold member
    January 3, 2008
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    Beautiful Write!

    Thanks so much for your entry!
    Write on!
    *PEACE*
    Happy New Year

  • tiarna
    September 24, 2007
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    beautiful write well done


  • Dreams27
    June 16, 2007

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    aww...a beautifully written poem!! the stanzas flow well with the emotion there!! i enjoyed reading this lovely poem! thanks for entering and good luck!! take care, Sam (Dreams27) xxx


  • waydownuponjoy
    June 16, 2007

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    A Work of Art

    ... your message is very sound and your author notes confirms it all. It's hard to picture these words as lyrics because of knowing what genre that they fall into but philosophical your message rings loud and clear for me! If not this? then what? ... Good luck in the contest! joy

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