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Playful Pussycat

playful pussycat
perambulating proudly
paws never pause

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  • Ellis gold member
    December 19, 2007
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    This is Precious; I love this!

    Literation Plus! -- All but one word starting with "P." Cool.

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  • MourningSun
    December 14, 2007
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    This is a good haiku. I like it and good luck in the contest.


  • Candy6
    June 29, 2007
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    so cute.


  • acqua
    June 17, 2007

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    Oh one can see this cat! love the alliteration, too and it brings up the image of this kitty 'perambulating'. Enjoyed this, good luck in the contest and all the best~


  • NoWayJo
    June 15, 2007

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    PURR-fect! I love how you pull these alliterated haiku together.

    Thank you so much for this entry to the contest, Bill!

    Jo

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