When I lick your n.e.c.k it makes [us both] S~H~i~V~e~R.
My excitement t*r*i*p*l*e*s when
Y>O>U moan
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My [name].
R'u'n'n'i'n'g my fingers
D*
O*
W*
N* your [s*m*o*o*t*h] skin,
TO the V^
A^ Y^ below.
L^ E^
L^
Your WET-ness [(*b*)EGGING] ME on.
My [hardness] in your hand, w*h*i*l*e
I [push] your button.
[waiting]
h*o*p*i*n*g, knowing,
You [[WANT]] me inside Y*O*U. \\;//
Legs S_P_R_E_A_D, heavy B*r*e*a*t*h*i*n*G
[TAKE ME] you cry!!! && I do.
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Mrjunkman - Erotica
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- B/r/e/a/k me down && Call me a [[.tragedy.] by Heartbeatsxfading.
300 points, ended June 21, 2007, 11 entries
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whoooooo baby thats HO
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Extremely erotic Mrjunkman. You've made this style very interesting indeed. Keep up the great work, and best of luck in the contest!
D.D.M.
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Thanks David, It's an interesting style to work with.
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Scott you better not ever let my eyes read that in the mment of my heat lol> this write its hot your such hot coals burnning up under a barbeque pit what am I going
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Made me shiver from anticipation just reading this....wow...you are good....keep up the ggod work...smiles, Terry
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Terry, how you doing hon? Long time no talk...
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From what I can tell.. well done. I have just starting exploring this form.
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It's an interesting form indeed. I kinda just make it up as I go along...
The drops are what are hard, to get everything lined up sometimes takes quit a few edits.
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