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Flight of my Soul

Tick, Tock,
Another wish flys free,
The dandelion clock,
Holds many wishes for me,

A gentle breeze and see it fly,
Past the world and through the sky,

My gentle soul,
Floats on from,
The shining seedling,
of taraxacum.

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Dandelion and taraxacum

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    June 16, 2007

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    Great rhyme, correct answer. Like how you incorporated both names into the poem. Well done.

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    Storm