Every time you hear the wind
blowing through the leaves,
think of me
Every time you see a butterfly
fluttering by,
think of me
Every time the rain falls like
tears from the dark clouds above,
think of me
Every time you smell the soft
sweet scent of lilacs and roses,
think of me
Every time you look at the stars
in the night sky,
think of me
For every time you do I will be
there in all those beautiful
wondrous things
Every time you dream at night
think of me and I will be there
every time you hear the laughing
waters in the brooks that flow,
think of me
Even though I may not be near you
every-time you hear , see and smell
all of these beautiful gifts from God
I'll be there
Please tell me what you think
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I see you everywhere
When I see the roaring waves of the sea
With much vigour
I think of you!
In my dreams I see you so beautiful...
I think of you on waking.
When I get my blood bursting with love
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Even though I may not be near you
every-time you hear , see and smell
all of these beautiful gifts from God
I'll be there
I will not say that this poem is beautiful, I will say that your heart which has created this wonder is just beautiful..well done....
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thank you
you know i wish more people would see that beauty real beauty comes from the inside out
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Excellent
Even though I may not be near you
every-time you hear , see and smell
all of these beautiful gifts from God
I'll be there
Great ending words
The verse showes your gift well
Rick
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Wow
What imagery! How could someone not see a loved one in all these scenes? Specially when so well verbalized! I thoroughly enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing!
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LOvely!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is quite lovely and has such a poetic flair to it. I njoyed it from start to finish. Your imagery was beautiful as it all relates the nature and the beauty God gave us and how when we are gone our loved ones can remember the seasons of nature and how they relate our memory to that particular season. Thanks for sharing this piece and again it was quite lovely!!~~Toni~~
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So true
Lovely this write I do feel and see so many beauties in our world and I do indeed think of you and all I have before me
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BEAUTIFUL!!! I LOVE LILACS...THIS IS A SWEET AND PRECIOUS WRITE! I ENJOYED EVERY WORD!
BLESSINGS~
AZLYN
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THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL! IT GAVE ME THAT WARM & FUZZY FEELING...
"Every time you dream at night
think of me and I will be there
every time you hear the laughing
waters in the brooks that flow,
think of me"
...Sighhh!
LOVERLY, POET!
~ Nicholas
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This poem makes me happy. It's a very connected piece. -
nicely penned. enjoyed.
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love true as heart beat!
Love the nature and you love me naturally. Behind every event you are there in the background. your poem makes me think of greatness of love!
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Sometimes repetition is not a good thing in poetry, but in this case, it is part and parcel of the poem itself and certainly I think it makes the poem what it is. The whole thing flows beautifully in a simple way where nothing is wasted. I think more of us should stop and look around at all those things that remind us of those we love rather than rushing around and bemoaning our existence.
Well done and I am so sorry to hear about your seeing difficulties.
Blessed be ~ crisstiena
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BEAUTIFUL
VERY NICE AND THE FLOW IS WONDERFUL
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This is a light and airy piece with a lot of soul. It's a most welcome read in the morning when the brain aint entirely in gear yet. For whom it is written I don't have a clue but it's obvious they are very special to you.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
ps. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. I do appreciate it.
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lovely
this subtle piece was very well written and the reppition worked wonders.., i can feel the emotion of longing for or the sadness of missing a loved one through this write your very talented.., keep up the amazing work... p.s. thanx for the comment on thank you...
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a lovely subtle piece of poetry that sings straight to the heart from a loved one passed over, from someone dearly missed or from God himself.
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THANK YOU
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i like the subtle feel of you in this
very intriquing and it sticks
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This is lovely, so romantic, it makes me all dreamy.
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What a beautiful poem. I had a moment in the garden earlier as I picked some lavander and rubbed the leaves on my wrists. I thought of my mum for whom I planted it after she died. Your poem is special because it provides opportunities for many such moments. Thanks! Lovely work.
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A very nice piece indeed, the repetition worked well for this piece.
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Sentimental Piece
Oh this is a beautifully written sentimental piece and I did enjoy reading it. the repition is very cohesive to the whole write, well done.
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someone once told me there was too much repition in the poem
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