You are my best friend ,partner , lover
Baby you are my strengh that keeps
me going day to day
My ,my soulmate for eternity
Sweet heart I dont know how
long we will be apart
but i promise you will be in my heart
my heart and soul belongs to thee
I forgot what love was until
you loved me .
for you i would give my life
as long as you will my wife .
love you always
until we are reborn .
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Thank you for entering
This is so sweet and touching. You speak of a love that runs so deep, few people ever get to experience it.
Well done!
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aww! this was a lovely poem! thank you for sharing it!
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You did a wonderful job here. You have managed to pull me into your thoughts with your well chosen words and have carefully pulled me along with each beautifully flowing line. Nicely done. Thank you for sharing and best wishes to you. Keep that pen handy dear poet. ~Midnight Lace
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awwww i love it, it's full of love (iv'e been reading love poems all day) and it's so sweet to sat you'll all ways be in my heart. i can't get enough of your poem it's so......true and full of love and emotion, i could marry this poem, cause it feels alive.
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There is no greater love than one who would give his life for another. Beautiful sentiments expressed in this poem. We should all be so blessed to find such deep love.
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Wonderfully written. Your love for this woman really comes through in the writing. A passionate write. I loved it. Well done.
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This is such a wonderful poem. It really displays the true passion in this couple's relationship with your vibrant word choice. Great job and thank you for the enjoyable read.
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Wow, This is so gorgeous, in an extremely sad way. I love it. It is beautiful. It has pure emotion and it is so personal
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for you i would give my life
as long as you will my wife .
love you always
until we are reborn .
what a wonderful sentiment you brought here my friend..I love it..
What a great penning is here revealing the sentiments of the warm soul ..
this is really a heartfelt write..This is just a wonderful piece of the heart bringing a kind of the feel of the touch of love in a divine way..
well done
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very sweet poem
You are my best friend ,partner , lover
Baby you are my strengh that keeps
me going day to day
i really like that part -
This one is beautiful
I love love, and this shows love in all forms
I suggest capitals at the beginning of your lines
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A very sweet piece lots of feeling great job bud !
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sounds like pure love and joy to me, or at least when the reunion comes.
loved the flow of this.
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This is beautiful..... I know te goddess of which you speak she is such a treasure and has such a beautiful heart..... am glad she has someone like you in her life
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thank you baby
i loved it ,i feel cherished and honored . you are so sweet and my love grows more for you every day .kisses from your yankee girl -
Awww... this is really sweet. This is my favorite part:
my heart and soul belongs to thee
I forgot what love was until
you loved me .
It really called to me. Thank you so much for your entry, and good luck in the contest.
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This is a bit of a short piece, but very powerfully written and has amazing emotion. Great job for your first piece, bro. Two thumbs up.
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this is really beautiful, i wish that someone would write something like this for me.... it has feeling and love... thank you for sharing it.... take care my friend
Linda xxxxxxxxxxxxx
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