seeds
tiny eggs
of life
waiting...
to spawn
but for
a season
succulent trees
spawned from
my seeds
and
now,
my season
is done
two trees
seeds
tiny eggs
of life
waiting...
their season
to
spawn
A contest entry
- Inside the Apple... by Nicolette.
900 points, ended June 26, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quick Pre-write Contest by Nicole Hanna.
300 points, ended July 9, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Lovely. I can't really say much more than that. This is a simple write, but still very much expressive, so I sure can't find a whole lot at fault with that. I really enjoyed it, and I thank you for entering it in my contest and giving me the chance to read it.
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Love in the seed is a gift to life. Nicely sung.
Peace & Love, Tom B.
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Very tight piece of poetry that gives a poetic interpretation of the circles of life...all kinds of seeds. Reminds me of a poem by Dawna Markowa..."that which comes to me as seed will go on as blossom, and that which comes to me as blossom will go on as fruit (or trees). Lovely penning.
Thank you for posting it in my contest.
~ Nicolette
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I really like this, absolutely fantastic, feels like you have not tried so hard (perhaps you have!) - anyhow a very natural write. Like its style a lot.
x
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an apple seed in fertile ground yielding up trees and fruit, imagery here to seeds, trees, and seasons; a time for things...very nice..PK
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Awesome write, I hope you place.
whisper
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