In all eternity there can be
but one love as ours..
Your love has sent my soul
aloft..
You inspire me more than any
thing else ever could
You encourage me when I am
discouraged
You guide me to do greater things
in my life
You comfort me when I am sad
You laugh with me when I am
happy
But most of all you love me
unconditionally
You are in my heart and tied to
my soul forever
I will always love you.
Author notes
this is a pre write
A contest entry
- Have you ever been in Love by Endeavor.
900 points, ended February 10, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I have read your verse
Thank you so much for submitting your words to my contest
I will comment in detail on my final selections
I wish you well in the contest
Thank you
Rick
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awww this was so sweetly written , a beautiful touching verse.
Great job
goodluck
~Lisa~
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SORRY
I FORGOT THESE
I ALSO FORGOT THE CAPITALS
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A poem from the heart
I like this poem because it is crisp and clear and good and beautiful and it comes straight from the heart.
I only started writing poetry in March this year and it still amazes me how just a few simple words can express so much and move me so greatly.
I look forward to reading more of your poems.
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i love this. its love at its most pure. I remember loving like this, like a child - wholy, unashamedly and without fear.
You are very lucky to love someone like this, and you put it into words eloquently.
wonderful!!!
Han xxx
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Sometimes one feels this way at first, but then things change; others are lucky and find this special someone for all eternity. Liked the message you share in these lines - from the heart and easy to read and understand.
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Another beautiful peace, I had a feeling of calm reading this write.
Love should always be unconditional and not about how much one gives or one receives in return and fo this reason these were my favorite words:-
But most of all you love me
unconditionally -
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THANK YOU
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