I'm floating on air,
I haven't got a care
Kissing in the rain,
Takes away all the pain
I truly love you,
I'm so glad I have someone to get me through
You light up my life,
When it seems I have nothing but strife
Your eyes are the most beautiful shade of green,
In our love, nothing could intervene
Strong, it stands,
You're the only one who truly understands
Our love is continuous,
I'm full of bliss
You truly amaze me,
To my heart, you hold the key
Take me away,
Far from my dismay
I hold you so dear,
You've riddened me of all fear
Although things may start changing,
You'll always be my everything
Copyright {c} 2007 Hannah Duffin {All Rights Reserved}
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Comments
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Superb Writing
Ahh, this is wonderful. A really beautiful piece of writing. The rhyming in so very good in this. This is not my type of writing, but I really do appreciate the form and the words used in this piece to bring it to life. You are very very good. Keep writing.
All the best
Wayne
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Awwww, how cute! Love this, great imagery and emotion!
HAve a wonderful day,
FallenPoeticAngel
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